Date: 2016-03-19 02:58 am (UTC)
Omg this is so awesome!! This is everything I could have hoped for <3 <3 Balthazar and Samandriel are the crack pair I love the most and I am so ecstatic that you wrote such a long and glorious fic for them :D

Young was a misnomer of course, for all but the archangels were created within the same breath. But even beyond the age of his vessel the boy evinced a certain innocence and calm naivety, typical of angels basking in the obedience of Heaven every moment of their existence. Early exposure to Earth had a corrupting effect down the ages, Balthazar had noticed, and he was sure this one had never been down before.

I love that phrase, "all but the archangels were created within the same breath," but that explanation makes it make sense how Samandriel comes across as youthful and naive in spite of the fact that he should have been the same age as any other angel.

He broadcast the Enochian word at the same time, short range with the slightest push of compulsion, to emphasize he wanted the real name. The one linked with his grace, and thus his angelic power.


....ummm... that was a little hot somehow... Balthy usin a tiny bit of compulsion...

“Photons?” Samandriel finally ventured, inadvertently projecting the concept of matter in Enochian in his struggle to translate the words. “Condensing water vapor? Molecular dinitrogen and carbon dioxide with small amounts of…”

Lol poor Samandriel, so confused XD gonna start rattling off literally every molecule he sees

He leaned forward and met the Samandriel’s lips with a kiss. The other angel’s eyes widened in shock and surprise, but he didn’t jerk away in confusion. The young vessel was responsive, very good. Balthazar pressed him back against the cold glass and leaned into him, just enough for the both of them to feel their long flesh sinking into each other. Even if Samandriel had no sexual self-awareness — common among the Heaven-bound — the touch alone was enough to fire up his borrowed body’s synapses. When Balthazar pulled away, Samandriel's face shined with an expression of awed gleaming wonder, the exact look humans sometimes sported when gazing at the shielded form of angels. Neither side realized that the inspiration flowed both ways.

Ahhhh!! This kiss!! I love love love how Balthazar decided to make his point by jus going for it, and I adore the way you distinguish that Samandriel doesn't have any sexual self-awareness but is still getting fired up about it. (and how the awe is going both ways - it's nice that it isn't just Balthazar steamrolling lil Samandriel, but a little give and take.)

This fic is perfect, thank you so much for writing it for me!!
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