I love this! There's a sense of anticipation, of possible danger, from the very beginning, yet Sam-in-the-kitchen is almost lighthearted. TDean's reaction to Sam's strawberry-sauce mishap was the turning point from light-hearted to dark. Their meal has a bit of a "Last Supper" vibe to it -- the sense of impending doom was beautifully done, just masterful. And the last line with Sam leaving the dirty dishes? Kicks like a mule, it does. Per-FEC-tion!
Beautiful, masterful writing . . . and a killer story, to boot. Thank you so much for such an awesome gift, Mystery Writer! ♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2016-03-20 12:35 pm (UTC)I love this! There's a sense of anticipation, of possible danger, from the very beginning, yet Sam-in-the-kitchen is almost lighthearted. TDean's reaction to Sam's strawberry-sauce mishap was the turning point from light-hearted to dark. Their meal has a bit of a "Last Supper" vibe to it -- the sense of impending doom was beautifully done, just masterful. And the last line with Sam leaving the dirty dishes? Kicks like a mule, it does. Per-FEC-tion!
Beautiful, masterful writing . . . and a killer story, to boot. Thank you so much for such an awesome gift, Mystery Writer! ♥ ♥ ♥