Oh I love this - for lots of reasons, not least because you found a way to have Nancy live. I really liked Nancy! Giving us a POV of someone who was an outsider brought inside in dramatic circumstances is so interesting, and you really got across the trauma she'd be left with. Great job at placing this after Dean's stint in Hell too, just enough information to let the reader know without Nancy ever really finding out the truth.
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Date: 2017-04-03 12:24 pm (UTC)Lovely writing!